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Dark-Brutal-Metal

This is by far one of the best if not the best produced songs on newgrounds in terms of sound quality.Even so, I still see room for improvement.

I feel that the Guitars are a bit too trebly, because at times I dont really dont know whats going on when you are tremelo picking.That and I feel they dont really have a ''kick'' to them..You know?

Other than that, your song/production skills are pretty solid.

Nice work.

Goatchrist responds:

The trebly feel is quite intentional, to be honest ^^

but I'm always working on the production. Thanks for your detailed review!

Good but..

I feel that it would have been better if you cranked up the volume a tad once the instruments started kicking in.It was still good though.

It sorta sounds like something you would hear in an anime..Kinda like a futuristic halloween?

zomgkerrie responds:

yea, it seems the general consensus is that i need to learn how to work balancing the different channels and levels better haha. and futuristic halloween ftw lol....thank you! that's actually a huge compliment since i love the music that is anime! thanks so much for taking the time to listen adn review!

Too long

The song is a bit too long and it needs more vareity.Its not a bad song it just needs some fixing up.

Try messing around with it some more.

FolksFox responds:

2 and a half minutes is too long?
Wow you are impatient then... lol...
I actually wanted this to be 3 minutes
Cuz its too short. Lol, thanks for reviewing. I appreciate it.

Good

Its not bad at all.

Although..It doesnt sound like it is at its max potential.It could use a bass and some drums.But yeah..Its still good as it is.

ConnieB responds:

thanks, every drum line ive tried seems to take over the whole song, i can't really get something that fits in there good, i was still pretty new at playing bass when i recorded this so i understand what you mean by that...

Good

It sounds nice once it reaches the 41 second mark.Keep up the good work!

NotAlive responds:

thx

Jason!Jason!

You need a girlfriend buddy!

Anywho..Good job.Its the best one yet.

KlanMaster911 responds:

Thanks

It was decent..

1.I went on for too long.
2.The repatative drumming got old after a while.
3.The lyrics were not as funny as before.

Yeah..Just work on it some more..

KlanMaster911 responds:

I know..

The problem is that I dont try...

Bipolar spanish guy?

I guess he didnt love him after all XD

KlanMaster911 responds:

Nope.

Sinister

I like it.The progression you make at 24 seconds is awesome.It would be pretty brutal if you added in a distorted guitar into the mix.But it should be limited of course.

Anywho.Keep up the good work.

brujeria responds:

probrably wouldn't sound bad if i did but I wanted to make a piano piece, although... if you give me the idea I will try to see if it fits, because I don't see how guitars would go in this piece, I can hear vocals but not guitars

I like it

I sort of felt that in a way..It is pretty good except for the minor flaw in the timing .Well anyways I liked how you added the raining to the beginning of the song.That and your proficient use of the wah wah : ).

It adds more of a feel to the song really.Well those are some of the words from the insane.Keep up the good work.

DarKsidE555 responds:

LoL thx! Well, what can I say...one of my first audio recordings or better to say "teh first" audio of that I did with a shitty headset microphone so the last I had to worry about was my timing. XD

Though I agree that it isn't boob on like it should be. Anyways, thanks for checking and faving! :)

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